by Andrew Packard Aug 9, 2013
category :
Life, society /
other
"Will Tomorrow Come?" |
by Amreen
I agree with Jane, the rhyme scheme is indeed flawless and still brings out the horrific truth of today's world. The imagery is perfect and awesome. |
Thank You so much! Smile! |
I loved the rhyme scheme here, moreso it didn't seem forced. The play on emotions and the anxiety we are given from all the terrible things going on in the world today, that message was clear. Great write Andrew! |