by Curtis Young
Love IT |
Nice. i love all of it ... :) |
by Fire Catches
This is a great poem.It takes me back to a winter that I've built inside my head. |
by Redangelwings
Ok. Kiley. I love this poem as well because there is a lot of sadness behind the meaning that no one else sees here. I love how you put this in the nature category though. It could go both ways and I love that about poems. You did a really really good job of capitiving the sadness winter can feel like. The imagery, flow and rhyming here were so spot on. I also like the line connect with each stanza as the short lines make the flow so much better. It works well as a three stanza poem I feel. Here is what I think: |
by Blue Jasmine
This is a wonderfully written poem. Loved it!! |
by Toddies
"and flames of desire" it was soo good all the way to the end |