First off, I apologise for not reading much or commenting lately...its just been hell here you know, so this piece was one I was intent on commenting on as soon as I read, and I will get to the others soon, I promise.

I felt there was just a little bit of reservedness with this piece, a hesitation, like it was restricted when it was evident more wanted and need to be said, I suppose that's how I interpret it to my own thoughts of late but truthfully,

There was something intriguing, and so you about this write, I can't explain it properly, the elegance even with the pent up emotion and frustration.

As always MA, a great write
xxx

I don't like long poems, but the flow of this poem was so smooth that I wanted it to be a bit long. I didn't even realize when it started and when it end.
A poem should be like this --and I am confused why this poem is here in this section, just because you used terms related with gardening u put it here.
this should be some sad love section or some where else.
you portrayed whole idea of breaking up and from there live alone with harsh feelings very well.
It happens, sometimes we upturned the soil of relationship and corner ourselves just to find how strong we are without the one whom we love so much and in that pursuit we discover something new in us.

Sorry for double post.

Sorry for triple post.

Sorry.