Comments : You can't write a poem about morning farts (Villanelle)

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    This was not only hilarious, but tasteful, creative and to add it in a Villanelle is priceless!

    I truly love reading your poetry and this poem made me giggle from start to finish! It had an elegant flow within a cute message... just wonderful!!

  • 11 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Abby, you take the crown for high class humor!

  • 11 years ago

    by Britt

    Maple, I don't think a fart poem should be tasteful... EWWW. hahaha.

    Abby.... I just don't even know what to say about you, lol. This had me crackin' up. Your brain is a wild one.

  • 11 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    Like my father would say, "if it aint paying the rent, then it has to go" I loved this poem. The rhyming scheme I loved as well. So funny. ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by TheDarkCloudBehindthePoet

    Like my father would say, "if it aint paying the rent, then it has to go" I loved this poem. The rhyming scheme I loved as well. So funny. ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Lol I loved this got me laughing so I nominated it good luck :)

  • 11 years ago

    by silvershoes

    If this doesn't win the weekly, I'm quitting.

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    This is hilarious and romantic, and it sure will win the contest. The last part just made my day.

  • 10 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    The more I read this, the more I believe it is a masterpiece

  • 7 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    Haha, oh my, a masterpiece indeed. Haha.