that one is really sad... but i really really liked it!! You write really good poems... usually i think that 14 year old don't really know what there talking about... but i was really wrong cuz your poems are always so good, and a lot of other young writers are awesome too!! I just think that your really good and you should keep on writing cuz you have a lot of potential to be a writer or whatever you want! You seem like you have a lot of emotions and i love how you express them!! keep it up!!
-Mols