Which Way To Go

by Love Fallacy   Aug 14, 2013


Decay the way i knew i would
these changes come so fast
disintegrate into the mist
now visions of the past

this lonely life, my only life
my soul a vagabond
deciding on the path which I
will choose to walk upon

please my lord just make the choice
i can't stand the wait
limbo now is where i sleep
please decide my fate

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  • 11 years ago

    by L

    The limbo that place where souls wait until they either go to Heaven or Hell. But I think it will depend on the actions we take on Earth to decide which place we are going. It's all up to us.

    Also some say it doesn't exist, others that it does, but who knows. Either way, I feel you did a good job with this piece. I enjoy the read.

  • 11 years ago

    by HeightenedAwareness

    Cute

  • 11 years ago

    by TSI25

    I found my mind rather loudly thinking on how only we can really choose our path through life, outsourcing our free will to others strikes me as a certain kind of foolishness certainly. otherwise the poem had an interesting feel to it. sometimes we just dont know what to do and just want some one to tell us.

    well done