I found my mind rather loudly thinking on how only we can really choose our path through life, outsourcing our free will to others strikes me as a certain kind of foolishness certainly. otherwise the poem had an interesting feel to it. sometimes we just dont know what to do and just want some one to tell us.

well done

Cute

The limbo that place where souls wait until they either go to Heaven or Hell. But I think it will depend on the actions we take on Earth to decide which place we are going. It's all up to us.

Also some say it doesn't exist, others that it does, but who knows. Either way, I feel you did a good job with this piece. I enjoy the read.