This is cute sweetie

Cute poem!!! I enjoyed reading it.

4/5

One word. Wow... Thats all i wil say

Aww so cute

How cute!

This is a very cute poem. I loved how you used his name as a poem and took each letter to make words for that that letter. This shows how much romance youhave for each other here. It makes me have hope that love is truly real and brings warmth to my heart. When I think of this it makes me think of ssomeone who has fallen in love for the first time. :). Like a school girl or something like that. I like some of the wording you used because you say how much he affects your life in many ways. Like with your heart and just in general. Overall there are some spelling errors but I thinl they flow with the poem and what you will trying to say. I also liked the title because of it's simplistic nature. You did well to use it to make the poem better I think. Again overall this is a very adorable write. The flow is very nice and the lines tell a real story of you and him which in turn makes it a better poem because it shows love and you put your heart into it. Well done