I love this message as a whole because of what you build up to the end. The first two stanzas are really sadthough. When we have been hurt I think we always try to hide the pain. I love how you hide behind your smile. It is based on reality. We all hide from the truth bbecause we don't want to feel the pain. No one can really see what we hide inside. When we are hurt people judge us for who they think we are. The girl who hurts is not who you are. Its just what people make you think you are.

I like the thousand lies line. You get your point across here. You start opening up about who and why you hurt. We all can hold back our heart and guard ourselves from people. I also love how you use the word secret because it is your own personal secret that no one knows. We have to hold back tears to not feel judged at all. We lose someone it really hurts and all we can do is move on. Sometimes it is for the betterthough bbecause the silver lining is we can start a new. If someone hurt you really its better to move on.

I love how you used your sadness at first and then you bring hope into your life. Like moving on has started to heal your heart. Sometimes all we can do is paint a smile. I lovethe day line. Everyday all we can do is startanew or we can if we choose too. Show uyour light. I do how you seem to compare the day and light. The day I see can being a sunny day. I love that. I hope the new person people see will be what she always wanted to be.

I loved the ending as I said earlier because people will always try to judge you but you can't let them bring you down. There is so many people who care about you and all you can do is live for them and yourself. There is light inside of you all you have to do is find it! 5/5