by UtterlyAlive Aug 16, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
grieving, loss
Broken hearted, |
by TSI25
I read it almost like a nursery rhyme, not a bad thing. some of the rhymes were a little rough but thats ok. content wise it was pretty solid, you convey a sense of sadness and profound longing very well. the loss of your brother must have been hard. harder than i can imagine. |
Excellent... I think you could be good rapper.. You have great talent.. |
by WintersAngel
Simple fractions with so much meaning in each stanza. |