I like this piece a lot. It is sad but it's always great to remember a friend. The way you paint a picture of her she sounds beautiful and God is looking after her now. I know she is smiling over you and watching. Ilike the start but there is always a silver lining to passing and thats they live with no more pain. If death had ahold of her as you say that is really sad. But maybe she just wanted to end the pain.

I see a couple of small spelling errors that I hope you change. Near the ending. Tgose should be those and eues should be eyes. Other wise this is a very lovely poem for a special friend. 5/5