Comments : Wasting away

  • 11 years ago

    by Steven Croat

    Hard lines :'(
    Sad and nice poem!
    Keep on!

  • 11 years ago

    by Aubrey

    Thanks

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Very sad piece... you are a really great writer when in comes on sad piece. don't adopt just keep on writing :)