Helpless [Senyru]

The title fits so perfectly with the poem as a whole. I loved the build up and the meaning behind the three lines.

First line- I love this to start out the poem because longiing can be in secret too. Your heart can feel so much love but you build up your walls to protect yourself. Undisguised is a good word because you want to show this person how you feel and you show itaactually. You want to know how they feel but you put yourself out there unguarded.

Second- you want anything or anyone to fix your broken heart so you go to anyone. Whether you love them or not. You want to feel close and loved even if you seem to always get hurt. The heart can give you so much trouble ehen you fall for someone quickly.

Third/end- This ending is great because it shows people how fragile the heart can really be. When we give our heart away we give that person the power. We really do feel helpless and that is the point. Love makes us fall hard. You bring so much to life in such a small piece. 5