Comments : Nameless.

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This poem has so many things going for it. Wow! I would say the best poem I have read from you so far. Sometimes we get so frustrated we dont know what to write. I like the blank stares stanza because thats how we feel a lot of the time. It could mean you are daydreaming too though. Headphones can be such a source of inspiration. I love the light or dark because itis a build up for later. The moonlight is such a bbeautiful thing to write about.

    The night time is overall a great thing. It really is quiet and so full of inspiration. The ending is great. I read it as we all want a place to feel safe or a place just to feel inspired and write. Hiding is great at times because wewant to be alone. I love the wording and the message here. Every line connects and the ending is the twist. 5/5