Wow, you write so well.
It doesn't have any imaginary but still it's beautiful.
Sis, the same going on in my life.
I love someone but she is not replying to me.
I can understand how you feel.
And once again, the rhyme, flow, emotions just everything about this poem is perfect.

I like this poem a lot. There is so much sadness to it! It's hard to never let anyone go. When love is in your heart is hard to hear nothing from the one you do love. You alwaya think the person is the one but sometimes it doesn't work out at all. I love the deeper meaning of this poem. The question is always asked where did we go wrong? Its hard when you feel like you are the one to blame. promises are easy to say and hard to keep. You can't assume that love will last forever. Letting go is always a struggle anytime your heart is hurt. I think if you be honest with this person or anyone you will be fine.

Honesty is always the best. Even if you get hurt you can be happy you let them your feelings out to them. You never really want to know if they love you when you have been hurt. But I love the lines because you do still want to know for the curious factor. I think its easier to move on if you do. I can see this person as your first love and you will always love them. But in theend you have to move on for the better. Love this! I see no fflaws. 5/5

Such a lovely poem i can feel you pain i love it you are great