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  • 11 years ago

    by Edward Oropeza

    Very impressive piece, somehow this relates of archive-less memories of those who are forgotten or people who have not care, Your word of wikipedia does a greater impact to the whole story, because you have to make it though pretty difficult the gap where wikipedia and other references were unable to document their untold stories. Your idea about this piece is pretty amazing. well done

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Sometimes, I feel that you take too much upon you and this poem reminded me of that.

    specially, the part about feeling incomplete

    So many things are happening around the world and there''s not much one can do, yet we feel like there should be more that we could do.

  • 11 years ago

    by LadyLk

    Beautiful.. as i have been looking up on wiki my own references for suicide lately.. beautiful!!