Paradise

by TheDeepestWriter   Aug 24, 2013


When your sad, you lay in your room and stare at the wall
all of your problems began to fall, the dream of the day takes it's place , takes you on a journey right infront of your own face, a fantasy begins in a place full of wonder,are your nightmares strikes like thunder , a loud bump that makes you fantasy fade away you see yourself in a dark room and hear something coming your way scared to death and your in the corner waiting to see the light before the dark takes over fighting your fear as the only option crying and scared feeling lost and- you close your eyes hoping its all a dream feeling so scared and alone than ever suddenly the door opens and you see a small path of light as u squint your eyes to see the light you follow that path no matter how hard it is you keep trying and your keep trying and you almost to the light but you get knocked off your path and fall into a pit and your trapped there dark again this time your NOT scared, the light tells you that fear conker's everything and when you become fearless light will find you and lead you you stand up in that pit you fell in you stayed strong you force the light into the darkness and you follow that that path of light but it tells you to never look back because behind the path of light is a trail of darkness that awaits you but you won't go cause you won't look back and when you get to the end you would have lived on a life of my dark fantasy ...

Welcome to my world it's called Paradise

Cameron Bazile

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  • 11 years ago

    by Robin A Walter

    Like where it was going, but too long winded, left me trying to catch my breath at the end. Be more direct, poetry flow with a life of it's own, not words tumbled on top of another.
    Poems don't have to tell a story, they just paint a picture.