Please, please, please don't go!!! I really need you here!!

You have so much to live for sweetie. I know life is hard, always has been, but you will getthrough it I promise. pm me if you need to,, I am here. I promise. I've had a lot off suicide attempts in my life, about five or six this past week, I understand, I promise.

A very well written poem, I can even feel the pain... There are a couple of mistakes like in the third and last stanza you wrote "finale" but if you take away the "e" it'll be perfect. Really great poem!

Wow! I was hooked to this poem right away! I have gone through the same thing contemplating suicide. I always thought it would be better and I would be happier.

This poem hit home for me. 5/5

*~Britt-Bratt~*

Hey it's larissa !
Nice poem.. Very deep :-/