Comments : Conspiracy Of Silence

  • 11 years ago

    by Hallucinostic

    Again a wonderfully written poem from you. Well, eventhough you've been writing less lately, I expected nothing less. Anyways, the poem, a lot of sad poems are written here each day and its really difficult to find something interesting in sad poems anymore, but hey, you managed to keep me reading so that'll surely keep me reading new stuff. All in all I like this, specially the first and last few lines.

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    I like this Meme..I always feel like I can become one with your poetry, like I wrote it...you use the same tone I do when venting with the, 'You see', and 'now where does that leave me?'...I love that tone in poetry because it adds a bit of rawness and realness to it. when emotion can be felt through words, thats an awesome poem.

    I hate this feeling you describe here. Giving someone more than what you even though you had in you, just for them to not appreciate it and leave you hanging in silence. You described that event very well here.

    nice write, loved the title, love the ending.