Mandy's death

Mandy's death
by Sam

Why did you kill mandy!!
mandy was an innocent girl!!
mandy never hurted no one!!
mandy was so kind she was a
saint!!why did you have to kill
her!!

why did you kill mandy?
she was caring,loving girl!!
she was not support to die so painfully
how can you slaughter an saint as if she
was a horrible person!!

why did you kill mandy?
she was an angel an angel that
always sacrifises her time for someones
else time why did you kill mandy?

Very strong message

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Mandy's death
by Sam

Why did you kill Mandy!!
Mandy was an innocent girl!!
Mandy never hurt anyone!!
Mandy was so kind she was a
saint!!why did you have to kill
her!!

why did you kill Mandy?
she was caring, loving girl!!
she was not supposed to die so painfully
how can you slaughter a saint as if she
was a horrible person!!

why did you kill Mandy?
she was an angel an angel that
always sacrifices her time for someone
else's time why did you kill Mandy?