Hmm. This is an interesting poem hun. It says so much though because when you look into the sky you can see so much inside of it. This sky is filled with darkness which is one way someone can see it. I think you are talking about depression or something like that. What do they believe though? It could be a lot I suppose. Do you want them to see happiness or not? But since the last line says black clouds await you are talking about something dark here. Though I am not sure what. It could be about their future or life. This is very sad and dark though there so much darkness within this deeper message. Great write.