Broken String

by Robert   Aug 28, 2013


The aroma of lavender, and sweet smell of spring.
Held me and you together with the help of red string.
Knotted at both end's, but over time was cut in the middle.
I look for a way to mend the break even if just a little.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    The rhymes kept the reading smooth and at
    the same time delivered a message and I also
    liked how you used a string to draw the current
    situation of a relationship. It brings vivid images for the mind..another excellent read :)

  • 11 years ago

    by AnnaCG

    I really enjoyed this. Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    Oh... are you trying something different?

    Can I say it's an attempt at an extended metaphor?

    I think is, I really like it! Specially, the way you rhymed it. I've been trying to rhyme extended metaphor but they are so hard. Well done.

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