Wow this is inspring, wonderful poem, clap clap

This could be a song...

You should pair this up with some music.

Well written! I liked this actually.

Short, sweet, to the point and has a badass rhyming scheme. Modern, but again, actually rhymes.

I like it. Thanks for sharing this :)

I guess, True.
Don't focus on a dude.
But rather a man who focuses on you.
It should be mutual.

Yes.

Nicely done.