Amazing writing skills displayed here. Good rhyming and the flow is spot on. I love it. Though you shouldn't turn to suicide, honey. You're too amazing for that and I would suffer from the loss of a great person.

This is a very sad poem but the emotion is great!

I loved how you describe the blood as Crimean tears. That is a perfect start. I love how you describe the knife without saying the knife. Held in your hand is no longer a secret and everyone can see your scars now. I love the second stanza it starts the build up or downfall of the person. The imagery you bring here is great. I can see the tool in your hand and the blood flowing and the pain you feel inside. The world really is cruel though so I understand that feeling. You are sad and want to numb the pain somehow so cutting is the only way you know.

O know that hatred in your heart and pain. It feels like no one cares at all but there is at least one person that cares and it's God! I do like the turning of the blade. You go both ways. All the decribing words you have here are wonderful. The ways you are sad though are great for the poem. It's great that you got your feelings out. The deeper you go it's harder to stay away. All the ways you have painted this is great because the ending is the end. Self harming is a horrible thing to fall for. I understand that people think it's great but its not at all. I hope you are ok. 5/5

This is so sad kayley, I would miss you. you'd be my loss.

Wow , well writen like it

Wow, great at the imagery and rhyme. Amazing descrption of a troubling ordeal. I hope you are not in this situation. Keep up the great work!

Wow just wow that's dark i'm feeling sad :( still a good piece