Broke My Wall

by AllyKat   Sep 2, 2013


You broke my walls,
came crashing down,
never thought I'd give up this easily,
something about you,
boy there's something about ya.
Is it the way you walk, the way you talk?
You got me addicted like a drug I can't escape,
the way we know each other so well has got me scared.
Could this be real?
Or is it a dream?
A dream I don't want to be awaken from,
I feel safe, I feel loved here in this place.
Will you meet me here?
Everyday from here on out?
You shouldn't have broken my walls...

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  • 11 years ago

    by AllyKat

    Thank you so much, love is definitely a mystery and it drives you nuts knowing you let your guard down then he makes it all worth it. My head IS twisted haha, which then I make twisted stuff lol.

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a really cute poem. It shows how much you truly love this person. Its hard to give someone your heart. When they break down your walls fully I think they are worth it. There is always something about another person that you fall for. I love how you leave it vague. And the questions you ask are great. Sometimes you dont ever know why you fall in love. The heart is a mystery at times. I like the compare to being addicted and drugs. Love really is a drug that is hard to break away ftom. What is the place you speak of? I love how you leave the readet guessing. It makes us think. Then the ending line is a twist you don't want to feel love. Overall thos poem is wonderful 5/5

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