by Redangelwings
This is a really cute poem. It shows how much you truly love this person. Its hard to give someone your heart. When they break down your walls fully I think they are worth it. There is always something about another person that you fall for. I love how you leave it vague. And the questions you ask are great. Sometimes you dont ever know why you fall in love. The heart is a mystery at times. I like the compare to being addicted and drugs. Love really is a drug that is hard to break away ftom. What is the place you speak of? I love how you leave the readet guessing. It makes us think. Then the ending line is a twist you don't want to feel love. Overall thos poem is wonderful 5/5 |
by AllyKat
Thank you so much, love is definitely a mystery and it drives you nuts knowing you let your guard down then he makes it all worth it. My head IS twisted haha, which then I make twisted stuff lol. |