Comments : What is?

  • 11 years ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    I like this..

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    Ok this is a very interesting poem. This is all very true. None of them can be without the other. I guess opposites do attract. The words you describe after the what if lines are great. I love how they are all kinda the same but all different. I love the deeper meanings inbetween the libes too. You feel like depression is dark and something light can overcome it. I like the ending lines too. There is no good with bad and no dark without light. we do take things for granted though. We don't realize how happy we can be. We take happiness for granted and we don't try to change. We need to feel pain in our past to feel the joy in our future. The life without death lines are my favorite because we fear death and because of that we don't fully live. I love the message because its all true and I hope people will read this. 5/5