Comments : Oh Dear Sun

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    This is beautiful its almost as of you could be talking of both the sun or a son waiting to see it/him again
    Good work

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    This is a really beautiful poem as it radiates with peace in your heart. I think the sun could be interpreted as happiness. You want the light to come back into your life and the rain is taking over. Everyone has struggles though don't forget that. I love how you say oh dear sun a lot. It could be saying the sun is your love and your heart is lost without them. The sun will always come back though trust me. If you are happy you have to treasure the days you are. 5/5