by The Queen Sep 5, 2013
category :
Sadness, depression /
lost relationships
It's a quarter past five and my internal clock would ring anytime now. The streets are too silent to be cruising around and I'm not quite certain when the mailman will show up. Just so you know, I haven't slept in two days and I wrote this letter on the fifth anniversary of our first date, our first kiss hoping to revive the summer, hoping it ends differently than it began. |
by Abed
Lovely write. It's so rhythmic, dramatic, and beautifully penned. |
by Britt
I wish I could really dig into a proper comment... but every time I do I just feel overtaken and overwhelmed by this piece. One of the best I've seen from you. The emotions are really telling and heartbreaking -- you're longing for what once was and the almost desperation I felt when reading this just had me in tears. I've read this poem a few times now trying to find a proper way to highlight this and just can't. You made me speechless :) |
Wow... |