Evening's Eclipse

by Lifesbreath   Sep 7, 2013


Chock full of lunacy,
being offered up to the
great blue beyond.
We trap ourselves
in the travesty of our bend,
thus leading to the lake of lies,
lured by lavish living.
While, horrid hue tones
hover on the horizon,
Never knowing nothing besides.

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  • 11 years ago

    by Lifesbreath

    Wow, that is alot of visits and in only 2 days! I'm so glad this poem has meant so much to others.

  • 11 years ago

    by JaneDoeWrites

    I can't believe this has so many visits and yet no one has rated or commented.

    This is phenomenal. I love the way your writing has progressed since I first started reading your work.

    "We trap ourselves
    in the travesty of our bend"

    This line blew me away, I haven't seen anything more true. We get so envoloped in/obsessed with our emotions, lies and lifestyles, that we get stuck there. We don't know anything else.

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