I can't believe this has so many visits and yet no one has rated or commented.

This is phenomenal. I love the way your writing has progressed since I first started reading your work.

"We trap ourselves
in the travesty of our bend"

This line blew me away, I haven't seen anything more true. We get so envoloped in/obsessed with our emotions, lies and lifestyles, that we get stuck there. We don't know anything else.

Wow, that is alot of visits and in only 2 days! I'm so glad this poem has meant so much to others.