When I first started reading this I thought of the before sunset movies. :). Very romantic. It feels like at the start of this poem the women might be a writer and she is writing about love. She is cautious on love because she has been trying to find it a lot of her life. I also love the double story. Of the women and guy. The way you describe him is like godly almost. You say he is lonely and thats what makes us human. I love how she questions his smile as if they don't even know their own intention. They are there to fix their troubled relationship. The journey is the true struggle in any relationship I agree. Again I love the story and the double view point. Love. 5/6

You're so talented. I'll come back to read and comment later.