Comments : Hands off

  • 11 years ago

    by Biancas Veil

    So sad but written well your feelings are clear.
    keep expressing your emotions and hopefully writing them out will help.

  • 8 years ago

    by Em

    Wow Jason. A very dark, deep write. At first i thought oh yeah disagreements we all have those but then bam that ending blew my mind. Loved it although sombre especially as these things really happen to.

    Em

    • 8 years ago

      by jason garcia

      Thank you for that. I've never wrote a poem before these 2 that I wrote and I feel it helps a bit.