So I've read this THREE times..once last night...twice this morning...And I really can't seem to get a proper comments together..I can't seem to explain WHY I nominated it, I just know its so worthy of being nominated....

To sum up a reason, I absolutely loved the punctuation here. Comma's perfectly in place, repetition to prove your point. Loved the darkness in here, but not too dark. Just enough to show the sadness...the bird feathers were such an amazing touch to this...symbolic to death, to darkness of someone or something.

Your metaphors..just perfect..I'm not too in to sad poetry, but this I LOVED. It wasn't a poor me, my life sucks poem, this was a beautiful, sad display of regret. Thats amazing. Well done.

Something I can relate to right now in my life. Thanks.

This is a very deep write...I love your use of colors to help set the mood.