Cute, but also sort of sad. Loved it anyways. :)

Axel what a beautiful piece, written well.

It's hard having to watch on whilst the person you are lusting /loving is with somebody else isn't t? I've been there a few times and it sucks lol.

There are a few typos:

'You have other guy'
^
You have another guy

^Cause the world keep me away
But my soul reach you anyway
So I am allways by your side'
^
I feel keep should be keeps, reach should reaches and allways only has one 'L'

All in all a good write.
Em