Super-glue Love

by Baby Rainbow   Sep 13, 2013


This poem is not based upon
the knowledge I have learned,
nor will it be filled with poetic skills
like metaphors and rhyme.
These words I write are raw emotions
that are pouring from my heart.
The meaning is not hidden between the lines,
it is jumping straight into your eyes.
I do not need to be creative
to form the words I want to say;
the words that will express my love
and show the world what I think of you.

You entered my life
when I had already fallen,
leaving you to pick me up
and gather all the broken pieces.
Every day I feel your love
as you glue me back together,
but every day I feel your pain
when you see the damage that has been done.

I know one day I will be healed
and all this pain will be in the past.
Lessons learned from my mistakes,
strength to gain from each heart break.
I have opened my heart to let you in
and I hope that this is enough to make you see,
that no matter how long it takes
for this glue to finally dry,
I will never give up trying.

Every day I will feel your love
and know it will mend my heart.
And because of you,
I know I will never give up.

Saffie
22

13/9/13

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  • 11 years ago

    by Hellon

    Like you say at the beginning of this poem...nothing is being hidden here and, really it doesn't need to be because you are just telling this person the truth in a simple way. They have helped you find a way back to happiness and while the journey is still not complete they have proven that the are in for the long haul. I think it needed to be kept honest because they may not know about metaphors etc...I really liked this one once again. Just something for you to consider..

    and all this pain will be in the past.

    Do you think pain is necessary in this line...you already mention it just a little above and taking it out doesn't really change the meaning...

    and all this will be in the past.

    Just something for you to consider...

  • 11 years ago

    by Autumn Leaves

    This is a beautiful poem and it is a creative piece as well. I like the subtle rhyming and how you express your love for this individual or thing. Many times we do not acknowledge the affect that a person or thing has on our lives, but when we sit and consider what makes us happy we are able to benefit from what we love the most.

    Beautiful.....AL

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    I love how subtle this poem is. You unitentionally wrote about a person without writing about them. I loved the first stanza as it shows how real writing is indeed. I love the eyes here how the words jump into them. I love how you used this person's eyes as your muse and wrote about them from your heart. It shows how much you care about this person and love them. I love how your heart is in peices and this person picked you back up and you are falling more for them everyday. Its hard telling people about your pain and seeing them hurt. The past is in the past and you will learn from mistakes indeed. You will heal as love and time does that. You should never give up on you. You are stronger then you know or even think. I loved this poem as it shows how strong love is. 5/5 xx

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