I loved how you have described the details with such beautiful images and words.

//Like a vision, o'er her broken walls
Her song, like a rainbow mist,
Over endless plains, calling,
In the depths of my dreams.//

These lines are so dreamy ... loved the comparison of song to rainbow mist... as if it's echoing across plains ... your dreamscape.

There is such a dreamy feel to this read and I like the way you have weaved nature's beauty into this write..a lovely read!

Its nice to read your poems once again after a long time...keep penning!