Your side of the bed
by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX Sep 15, 2013
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On your side of the bed there a broken picture frame where memories used to be framed but now are fading away where photo of a love so strong is now broken an torn where a hearts used to be warm an hole now are cold an alone you give up on us an I got tired of fighting for something that so far gone one day ill get a new picture frame where new memoires will be made where Ill found a new strong love one who will turn this heart from cold to warm fix what torn someone who wont give up on us an all it took was you leaving your side of the bed for me to see there more out there then you an me |
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11 years ago
Its a good write a lot of typos but the meaning is clear. My only suggestion would be work on your flow. It feels a little jumbled.
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11 years ago
Okay thank you that how I feel about it yesterday I felt off an it made this off but im working on it an thank you for being honest that what I wanted :)
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