Comments : Your side of the bed

  • 11 years ago

    by WanderingShade

    Its a good write a lot of typos but the meaning is clear. My only suggestion would be work on your flow. It feels a little jumbled.

    • 11 years ago

      by Xx Grieving from the inside outxX

      Okay thank you that how I feel about it yesterday I felt off an it made this off but im working on it an thank you for being honest that what I wanted :)