"shinning"

^^Shining?

Michael, I love this. I'm rarely one for rhyming poetry but what I love about your work is that even though you tend to rhyme most of the time you always succeed into pulling me into your poems, and most of the time it's without even trying as I find myself hooked immediately; right from when I start reading.

My favourite part of this is definitely the reference of religion. I am new to my faith; having only just found my God, so it always inspires and amazes me to read words/thoughts of others when they incorporate their own faith into their work.

"May Love pass through my heart"

I really adore this line. It's so simple and straight forward and yet it speaks volumes. If only more people would adopt this attitude I truly believe the world would be a more peaceful and happier place.

Lovely rhythm, lovely message, lovely work!