No one really wants sadness but it is something we have to live with though. Should you give into it? No of course not but its hard to deal with indeed. Life is extremely difficult and hard to deal with indeed.in the sixth line where should be were. But crying can be a great way to release pain in a healthy way. I think hating people is very easy to do but its great to let go because it makes you feel so free inside and then you can live life. You don't need anyone in your life who hinders you. :). Get positive support try to be happy and do things you love. Like writing. You are such a great and unique writer. I believe in you. Xx5/5

Wow, powerful, quite short but thought provoking, great job, I liked it, especailly the last line, that really touched my heart, I adored it!