I like this poem. Though it is in quote form it is well written I think. The only thing I would change is puttingit into stanza form so that way I think it will free more freely and easier to read. The poem has nice imagrry but it is short and can be made longer. The love you have though here is great you can tell how much you love this person. I love how you compare beauty and the stars because the stars really are beautiful. Just I would describe this person more. Otherwise 5/5

A lovely piece Ryan, the comparison of the woman's beauty in contrast with the stars is reminds me of a poem by Billy Shakespeare"shall I compare thee to a summers day?" So beautiful, lovely emotion and warmth :-)