Comments : My love for you

  • 11 years ago

    by L

    I suggest to either use some punctuation in your poem or to break the poem down like this:

    "
    My love for you is a special kind of love
    my love for you is never dyeing
    my love for you will last forever
    my love will still be there long after I die
    my love will live within my heart and soul forever
    my love for you will last beyond the end of time
    my love for you will never ever be broken by anyone "

    As it becomes easier to read...

    or you can keep it the way you have it but just adding some periods or commas wherever it needs it. Just so it would be easier to read.