I love how this peice is filled with so many emotions deep with in. I love the feeling of heartbreak at first andthat is aalways difficult to deal with. Then when it seems all hope is lost here comes another person to catch your eyes. It might be hard at first because you still love another person but in time hearts always heal. Love makes your heart do many things. Friendship is very important with it. I love the story within this poem.It truly is hheartfelt and so lovely. It shows that true love can last forever. My favorite stanza is the last because its the end of the story and your love made it. The imagery is wonderful. 5/5

The rhyme and flow is spot on,
it reads like a verse from a birthday card and is flawless in my opinion.
because of this I am nominating this piece.
(good luck)

Problem is most people on this site turn their noses up at rhyming poetry. But a piece as good as this deserves recognition.

well done.

I love everything about this poem. there is so much emotion that you incorporated in the poem.

This poem is beautifully written! Your choice of
words made this a smooth rhyming piece filled with emotions. Its hard to write a poem which makes sense and at the same time make it perfectly rhyme without any hiccups..good job!

I am chuffed this won, you were really keen to win the contest and now you have,

well done

this poem deserves it.

Wow nice poem