I like this form and I like how you have penned
it to bring out the sadness. Its hard to make sense with the words been used backwards but you have done it well.

Words that are not tamed eventually creates a hole in a relationship. Washing away all hope..nicely penned.

The Palindrome form is one of the forms I find the hardest to write. This was nicely penned.

A palindrome...oh my...and what a beautifully written one. This is seamless and I just commend you.