Amends

by Chae   Sep 19, 2013


Mistakes are made
Hearts are broken
But none of it I'd trade
It's all been a great token

Maybe we aren't perfect
But I'd never love another
Actually it's been a wreck
I realize you are way more than a brother

I'm sorry for my mistakes
So please let's try again
I know it's been more than one take
But please I'm willing to make amends

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  • 10 years ago

    by Midnight Sky

    The is a poetic peace nicely done.

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    Wow, this poem is great. Some people do not understand how much you want to fix something, and some people never have the right words. but I love this! You done a great job

    • 11 years ago

      by Chae

      Thank you so much!

  • 11 years ago

    by Redangelwings

    What people don't understand is people make mistakes. Its hard to deal with yes but we have to find people who like us for us. I don't think anyone would trade the one you love away at all. No matter what you have been through. Your heart can't help the way you feel and its a great feeling indeed. No one is perfect and you shouldn't regret anything you have done. It's hard when you have been hurt but if you love each other it's totally worth it. I love how you say you love this person and you know you have made mistakes. Good writing 5/5

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