Ready to Give Up

I like the depth in this, I know life if a bit derogatory at times, but we r you poetry family, we always here for you ^^ well penned, keep writing

This is beautiful.

Nice poem but very sab

Thou liest for I see uncertainity in your echo! The day you stopped breathing may pass you the entrance exam to the saddest planet; and perhaps not turning to be the cheer you need in your boredom...... I like the piece, short, direct and pricise.

Don't go, don't leave. please stay. with me...