Comments : Ready to Give Up

  • 11 years ago

    by Sherwin Talapian

    Great poem sad piece :(

  • 11 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    Don't go, don't leave. please stay. with me...

  • 11 years ago

    by Bonaventure Onuabuchi

    Thou liest for I see uncertainity in your echo! The day you stopped breathing may pass you the entrance exam to the saddest planet; and perhaps not turning to be the cheer you need in your boredom...... I like the piece, short, direct and pricise.

  • 11 years ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    Nice poem but very sab

  • 11 years ago

    by Alessandra

    This is beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    I like the depth in this, I know life if a bit derogatory at times, but we r you poetry family, we always here for you ^^ well penned, keep writing