Jeevan

This is actually quite a meaningful poem you have written here. I think we all see our lives when we are younger. We paint a pretty picture of it and when it doesn't turn out we get sad. I like the last line as well because it throws a twist into the poem as well. An element of something that is not there you write about.I think inside we are all ddifferent and we want to make our own lives. Emotions play a huge part into it. When you feel happy we don't see ourselves as sad. Great write. You pack a powerful message in so few lines.

Very deep meaning...awesome write.

all the best & take care

I make a picture of life,
I thought my life would be like this
Now when I see
I stop watching
Because I didn't make this picture

A very meaningful write. Someone was living his or her life through you and you realized your life was your own!

Wow, thank you!