by Love Fallacy Sep 25, 2013
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
She bathes under the sunlight |
by Amy
This is good! Love the Expanded volcabulary |
by Britt
I have a few suggestions, but MA below highlighted some of them (like punctuation). |
Good use of imagery and the senses in this poem. To me, this woman seemed more earthy and part of nature, almost like nature complements her. |